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Application Tips

Answering essay questions is an important part of applying to college and for scholarships. Subiendo hopes to get to know you a little better, as well as give you practice at writing the college essay. You will find that many college and scholarship applications use similar essay prompts. On this page are a few hints to do well on your Subiendo application essays.

Writing your Essays - Tips from UT Admissions

(Reprinted from Be a Longhorn - http://bealonghorn.utexas.edu/freshmen/before/tips)

Here are some suggestions about writing an essay that’s not only accurate but may make your essay the one that stands out...

  • Don’t tell us what you think we want to hear. The university’s essay readers don’t have a perfect essay in mind – as a matter of fact essays that sound like all the rest of them – the essay that is expected – is more likely to be overlooked.
  • Be yourself. Show us what makes you unique, how you’ve dealt with issues and problems, what you think about the topic at hand. Good writing teachers tell their students to write about what they know. That’s good advice for college essays, too.
  • Use a natural voice and style. Although it’s always important to use proper grammar, spelling, punctuation, diction, etc., don’t write to try to impress anyone. Use words and a style that are appropriate for the topic you’re writing about, for someone your age, and for someone who’s trying to communicate clearly and logically.
  • Don’t be overly informal either. Your essay will be read by an adult professional. In almost all cases, you should avoid using words or phrases that you might use when texting someone or on a social networking site.
  • Develop your ideas. Although the length of your essay alone technically doesn’t matter, developing your ideas completely does matter. If you can do that in a single page of text, that’s good; but if it takes you three pages or so, that’s all right, too (as long as you’re not just adding words to make your essay longer). It’s not realistic to assume that you can clearly communicate your unique perspective about anything in a short paragraph or two.
  • Organize your thoughts. All good writing has a beginning, a middle, and an end. That doesn’t mean you should be formulaic in your writing (this isn’t a high school exit exam), but you should introduce your idea, provide interesting examples and details in support of your idea, and come to some sort of conclusion at the end.
  • Don’t respond to the prompt as though you’re answering a question. Again, we don’t have a perfect essay in mind. The prompt is supposed to get your mind churning, to make you want to tell us what you think about something that’s important to you. Your essay is your opportunity to do that.

For more information about UT Admissions, Application Tips and how to Be a Longhorn, check out their webpage at www.bealonghorn.utexas.edu.

Page last updated: 9/6/2012